MC - Lydia coloring test

I really love the way the illustrator for FF Crystal Chronicles and the Chocobo games does his/her coloring. I've attempted to mimic that a bit here on Lydia. I think it came out decent.

Then again, there's the proportional problems with the lineart, where the right arm's a bit too long and there should be more forehead and such.

On a side note, that hair is black. Yes it is, it doesn't look navy. honestly